Neurox Media Network: idolforums.com | aikenforums.com | IDF Webmail  
Neurox Media's American Idol 10, 9 & 8 / So You Think You Can Dance 8, 7 & 6 / Glee / X Factor Forums & Message Boards
Neurox Advertising   The banner image below is an ad.

Welcome Guest ( Log In | Register - It's quick & free! | Resend Validation )    

19 Pages V  1 2 3 > »    ( Goto last unread Go to first unread post )
( Star this topic Star this topic | View starred topics )    Reply to this topicStart new topic
> Story 4, I'm back...word
Happy Days
post Oct 28th 2003, 6:32 PM
Post #1



****

Group: Members

Posts: 112
Gender: Male
From: USA



That's right, I'm back...it's been awhile so I might be a little rusty, but once I get into the flow of things I should be able to get my groove back!

This story takes place about five years in the future so all the juniors are pretty much teenagers and little older...Oh and all the juniors live in the same neighborhood together...

Chapter 1:

ERR! ERR! ERR! ERR!

"Oh geez," Danielle said as she slowly opened her eyes. The light shining through her bedroom window seemed to immediately blind her as she stuck out her hand to block the sunlight. She looked over to her alarm clock that was buzzing at an obnoxiously loud volume. It was 7:00 AM,
"too early...must sleep," she said as she turned the alarm off and plopped her head back down on her pillow. Just then her bedroom door swung open,
"Danielle!" her mother's voice said loudly, "let's go! Time to get up! Breakfast is ready!"
"Urghhhhh," Danielle moaned as she forced herself out of bed. Mondays were always the worst.

Danielle got herself ready for school and walked downstairs to eat breakfast. As she sat down at the table, Mrs. White was finishing the eggs she was preparing on the stove and Mr. White was drinking coffee as he read the town newspaper.
"Morning Danielle," Mr. White said as he flipped through the pages of the newspaper,
"Uhh," Danielle groaned as she picked at the food in front of her, "Mom, do we have anymore peanut butter and banana bagels?"
"Um, I don't know," Mrs. White replied, "here have some eggs honey." Mrs. White put some of the runny eggs on Danielle's plate but Danielle did not seem interested.
"Hey look here," Mr. White suddenly said as he read one of the articles in the paper, "looks like your school's having a Halloween contest on Friday!"
"Really?" Mrs. White said, "why didn't you tell us Danielle? Have you decided what you're going to be?"
"Hey I got an idea!" Mr. White exclaimed, "why don't you dress yourself up in tinfoil and go as a baked potato!" Mr. White laughed,
"Or how bout I make you a costume, Dani?" Mrs. White interrupted, "I could get some orange fabric and make you a giant pumpkin! And you could wear a green bouree on top! How cute would that be?!"
Danielle sat wide mouth staring blankly at her parents, "Ok, first of all the reason I didn't tell you two is because I knew you'd say something like that. Secondly, a baked potato? A pumpkin? Come on, I'm 16 years old, not 2 years old."
Danielle's parents looked somewhat disappointed, "Well aren't you Miss Party Pooper." Mrs. White said,
"Yah, we're just trying to help sweetie." Mr. White replied smiling. He looked at his watch, "Oh! I have to get going or I'll be late for work!" Mr. White got up from the kitchen table and just as he was stepping out the front door a silver Mazda Protege pulled into the driveway with a screeching halt.

HONK! HONK!

Danielle suddenly jumped from her seat, "Oh, Jordan's here!" She managed to find one last peanut butter and banana bagel and put it in her mouth as she grabbed her back pack and headed out the door.
"Oh Danielle!" Mrs. White quickly called to her daughter, "I forgot to tell you that Mrs. Myers called and asked if you would babysit her girls on Friday. I said it wouldn't be a problem."
"Ok, yah whatever Mom I gotta go!"
"Promise?"
"Yah, yah I promise! I gotta go!"

Danielle ran out the front door and saw her dad talking to Jordan, who was still in the driver's seat of her car.
"Hi. Mr. White!" Jordan yelled in a very perky mood,
Mr. White smiled in a somewhat disapproving manner of Jordan's driving, "Hello Jordan. That's a very nice car you have there,"
"Thanks! It's brand new! Isn't it perrrrrrrdy?!"
"Yes it is, but only when it's going under 30 miles an hour,"
"Oh of course Mr. White!" Jordan replied with a big smile.
Danielle approached the car and gave her father a kiss on the cheek, "Bye Daddy!"
"Bye Danielle," Mr. White said as Danielle hopped into the car, "drive safely!"

Jordan's car peeled out of the driveway as Mr. White watched on nervously. He looked up to the sky, "Dear Lord, give me strength!"

"Morning gorgeous," Jordan said to Danielle as she drove,
"Hey," Danielle replied, "you want some of this bagel?"
"Ew, no! You're the only weirdo that eats those things."
"Fine suit yourself," Danielle said as she put another piece of the bagel in her mouth. She looked over at Jordan's speedometer, "come on Jordan, slow down a little bit."
"Uh, well thanks to you taking you're sweet ol' time this morning, we're going to be late. Plus, I'm allowed 15 miles over the speed limit...or 20, or something like that."
Danielle sighed. She decided to disregard the fact that Jordan was late to pick her up every morning, "just don't get pulled over."
"I won't you little old lady," Jordan decided to change the subject, "so, are you excited for Friday?!"
"The costume contest?"
"No, not the costume contest! The party!" Jordan looked wide eyed at Danielle,
"What party?" Danielle looked puzzled,
Jordan gave her "are you kidding me?" face, "what do you mean 'what party?!' The Halloween party AJ's been planning for like weeks!"
"That's this Friday?!" Danielle exclaimed,
"Yes, it's this Friday! Friday IS Halloween you know!" Jordan looked at Danielle's face which had suddenly become disappinted, "don't tell me you have other plans!"
Danielle sighed, "I promised my Mom I'd baby sit Mrs. Myers girls on Friday. I totally forgot about the party."
"What?! Dani, no!" Jordan yelled as she stared Danielle in the face. "We were supposed to go as 'Sugar and Spice'! What am I gonna do now?!"
"I'm sorry Jordan, I just totally forgot. I lose track of all these things with all the school work."
Jordan stared at Danielle annoyed, "...fine, have fun babysitting that crazy Gen girl and her sisters."
"I'm really sorry Jordan," Danielle said as Jordan glared at her, "I just--," Suddenly Danielle pointed towards the road, "OH MY GOD WATCH OUT!!"

Jordan slammed on her brakes.

To be continued...

What do you think so far? It's just the very beginning so don't worry, it'll get more exciting... cool.gif


--------------------
Your voice is silk that caresses my soul,
Your beauty warms me when I am cold,
From the start you were special I could tell,
An angel from above my sweet Danielle!

user posted image
My Stories: "Story" "Story 2" "Story 3" "Story 4" Please, call me user posted image
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
NX AdBot™
post Oct 28th 2003, 6:32 PM


NX Advertisement


Group: Marketing

Posts: I've been known to spam...
Gender: Not telling :P


Subscribe to NX to remove this advertisement post. Help us pay for our servers! Click for subscriber benefits.

 
 
Go to the top of the page
BillyIsTheIdol
post Oct 28th 2003, 6:35 PM
Post #2


And Who Said Blondes Are Dumb?
**********

Group: Members

Posts: 7,158
Gender: Female
Fav. AI4: Anthony Fedorov
Fav. CI3: Suzi Rawn
Fav. BB6: James



gack!!!

UR BACK AND THIS ROX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


--------------------
IPB Image
Ashley Leitao and Amber Fleury were ROBBED :(|Blend Award
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
honeypup
post Oct 28th 2003, 6:40 PM
Post #3



**********

Group: Members

Posts: 3,143
Gender: Female
From: Wisconsin
Fav. AI4: Carrie Underwood
Fav. AI7: Brooke White
Fav. Show: Scrubs



Awesome!!! Can't wait for more!


--------------------

<3 sarah | flickr | last.fm
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
buggychic89
post Oct 28th 2003, 6:43 PM
Post #4


Pami Wami
**********

Group: Members

Posts: 13,796
Gender: Female
From: Halfway Home
Fav. AI1: Kelly Clarkson
Fav. AI6: Blake Lewis



yay!!!!!!!!!!! i cant wait for more w00t.gif w00t.gif


--------------------
-Pami-
IPB Image
-<3...-
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
EMILDIX
post Oct 28th 2003, 6:43 PM
Post #5



*******

Group: Members

Posts: 1,061
Gender: Female
From: Canada



LMAO HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA laughing.gif I laughed so hard when it said "that crazy Gen girl"


that's so good Ed!!!! I loved the peanut butter and banana bagels and the costume suggestions from Dani's parents! So cute! Can't wait for more bounce.gif


--------------------
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
DRod87
post Oct 28th 2003, 6:48 PM
Post #6



********

Group: Members

Posts: 1,856
Gender: Female



omg omg happy day's story four!!!! it's awesome hd, i already love it!! grin.gif


--------------------
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
Happy Days
post Oct 28th 2003, 6:55 PM
Post #7



****

Group: Members

Posts: 112
Gender: Male
From: USA



Thanks guys... grin.gif

Now I gotta go do homework... getlost.gif


--------------------
Your voice is silk that caresses my soul,
Your beauty warms me when I am cold,
From the start you were special I could tell,
An angel from above my sweet Danielle!

user posted image
My Stories: "Story" "Story 2" "Story 3" "Story 4" Please, call me user posted image
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
tizzychick
post Oct 28th 2003, 7:07 PM
Post #8


Resident Ditz of IDF
**********

Group: Members

Posts: 3,268
Gender: Female
From: At my pink computer, in my aqua igloo, Ditzland, Canada



w00t.gif yay!!!!!!!! you're back!!!!!!!!!! eeek i LOVE your stories!!! can't wait for more!!!!! tongue.gif


--------------------
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
dancing_supastar
post Oct 28th 2003, 7:12 PM
Post #9



*******

Group: Members

Posts: 1,049
Gender: Female
From: Foggy City
Fav. CI4: Brandon Jones
Fav. AJ: Jordan McCoy
Fav. SYTYCD 2:Allison Holker



MORE MORE I love this story already


--------------------
IPB Image
Go Travis,Allison and Ryan
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
KtlynNDanielleRock
post Oct 28th 2003, 7:32 PM
Post #10



**********

Group: Members

Posts: 5,878
Gender: Female
Fav. AJ: Taylor Thompson
Fav. AI6: Melinda Doolittle



MORE MORE and remember i get dubs on kissing...ME KISS LOL


--------------------
IPB Image
IPB Image Thanks samren♥!
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
surferjay
post Oct 28th 2003, 7:35 PM
Post #11



*****

Group: Members

Posts: 445
Gender: Male
From: Hawaii



aww shyat he's back in action
lol nice work man
btw i read ur 3rd one (good stuff)


--------------------
love you lots kali user posted image
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
uncreativename
post Oct 28th 2003, 7:43 PM
Post #12



**********

Group: Members

Posts: 17,411



WICKED!!!!
*bows down to Eddy*
WICKED!! w00t.gif


--------------------
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
AmErIcAnJrSFaN4EvEr
post Oct 28th 2003, 8:16 PM
Post #13



*****

Group: Members

Posts: 440
Gender: Female
From: i live in a dream.. where i can still be with him..



great story... grin.gif


--------------------
i know i have a heart.. <3
because i can feel it breaking.. </3

Let`s go back in time..
back to when we didn`t have too say good~bye..
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
.katelyn.love.
post Oct 28th 2003, 8:21 PM
Post #14



******

Group: Members

Posts: 664



eek! great story!


--------------------
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
xoabercrombiexo
post Oct 28th 2003, 8:21 PM
Post #15



*********

Group: Members

Posts: 2,531
Gender: Female



its awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!


--------------------
IPB ImageIPB ImageIPB ImageIPB Image
I luv Christie, Sara, Desi, Lauryn, and Alexis!
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
dancinidolfan19
post Oct 28th 2003, 8:45 PM
Post #16



********

Group: Members

Posts: 1,885
Gender: Female
From: Pennsylvania



great story! i hope dani and jordie don't get killed!


--------------------
user posted image
user posted image |K|E|L|L|Y|- My Anti-Drug
Thanks Sam-bo-rulz for my blend!
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
Happy Days
post Oct 28th 2003, 8:49 PM
Post #17



****

Group: Members

Posts: 112
Gender: Male
From: USA



Surferjay...your blend is no joke, it's amazing... cool.gif

Thanks for the the comments everyone, I'm gonna try and write the second chapter tonight... grin.gif


--------------------
Your voice is silk that caresses my soul,
Your beauty warms me when I am cold,
From the start you were special I could tell,
An angel from above my sweet Danielle!

user posted image
My Stories: "Story" "Story 2" "Story 3" "Story 4" Please, call me user posted image
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
uncreativename
post Oct 28th 2003, 8:50 PM
Post #18



**********

Group: Members

Posts: 17,411



QUOTE (Happy Days @ Oct 28 2003, 08:49 PM)
Surferjay...your blend is no joke, it's amazing... cool.gif

happy.gif I made that happy.gif thumbsup.gif *double checks*
Yeah, I think I did laughing.gif


--------------------
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
coreyismytrueloveforlife
post Oct 28th 2003, 9:01 PM
Post #19



******

Group: Members

Posts: 798
Gender: Female
From: ~*CoNnEcTiCuT*~
Fav. AI5: Chris Daughtry
Fav. AI4: Carrie Underwood
Fav. AI6: Blake Lewis <333333 lover



woah alex!!!

i am so glad you are starting a new one!!!!!

i love it! keep writing ahh ill tell you all this in like two seconds on aim any way

yey!!


--------------------
American Idol 6: Blake Lewis, Chris Richardson, Jordin Sparks, Haley Scarnato, Gina Glocksen, Phil Stacey. (the most amazing 6 idols ever to be together on a season!

Carrie. Kelly. Clay. George. Ace. Daughtry. Pickler. Taylor. Kimberley. Mandisa. Anthony.Constantine. Nikko.
My idols <3


DAVID ARCHULETA IDOL 2008!! <3
[color=#006600]

Season 7:David, Amanda, Jason Castro, Michael Johns, David Hernandez, Asiah Epperson !

Yankees 2008: World Series we come.
Derek Sanderson Jeter <3
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
muzzimar0o
post Oct 28th 2003, 10:37 PM
Post #20



******

Group: Members

Posts: 912
Gender: Female



AHAHA!!! I LUVE YA EDDY!!!! laughing.gif

that wuz awesome! hehez i luved the costume suggestion especially the baked potatoe!! roll2.gif
n the part that crazy Gen girl n her sisters! hahaz who r her sisters? shifty.gif LOLZ


--------------------
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post

19 Pages V  1 2 3 > » 
Reply to this topicStart new topic
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members:



-
Lo-Fi Version 81 Time is now: Oct 31st 2014, 7:33 PM




We now accept check/money order donations in addition to online donations via PayPal!  Help us pay for our servers, donate to Neurox Media!  Thanks!
Links: Reality TV Links - American Idol | SirLinksalot: American Idol

Powered by: Invision Power Board v2.1.7 © 2014  IPS, Inc.
Licensed to: Neurox Media